Need help ASAP proofread, revision of a paper due soon

This is for an immediate job, I need my paper to be proodread, revised, edited to the fullest extent for any gramattical issues, fragments, run-ons, awk etc . I would prefer if track change is implemented so I can see what was done or chnage and to prove that revisions was actually done. If you can reword and smarten and up the vocab on some words/sentences I’ll throw in a $2 bonus but I have to see everything is up to what Im looking for in a revised piece

 

*This paper is 7 and a half page please read before justifying price changes of what the actual assignment entails